My Sister is like a mailbox!
My sister is like a mailbox sometimes you get junk even when you have a 'no junk mail' sign
My sister is like a mailbox she always looks the same
My sister is like a mailbox new things come every day
My sister is like a mailbox every thing is kept bottled up inside and sometimes it overflows
My sister is like a mailbox she has to have every thing hand delivered to her she never has to move a muscle
My sister is like a mailbox when it rains she can get a bit rusty
My sister is like a mailbox but I still love her
4 comments:
Well Done Chelsea, you have really made me believe that your sister is very much like a mailbox. This is an awsome poem because it sticks to the subject and you've described your sister very well.
Hanna
I really enjoyed your poem chelsea, there is a great comparison between your sister and a mailbox .It was also nice because also had a slight bit of humour .I really enjoyed it .
Rhea
I liked it alot it was really funny, and I thought you used very discriptive language and good vocab.
Lauren
Wow Chelsea your poem is amazing
I like all the words you used to describe her as a mail box,and you put lots of effort in by using a picture well done.
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